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Re: Universe (at war)
I liked how this was written, you definitely have a distinct voice, that of the scientific minded and cold blooded assassin. In response to Loveless above me, I think that ...
Feb 10, 2010 -
Re: Universe (at war)
When you and I verse each other it is like a war between trained Marines and kids with sticks and rocks. You were like a dog barking at a wolf, ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]
Nice and dark, but borderline cliche. Might help if I knew who Maya was though. 7/10
Jul 22, 2009 -
Re: I have black thoughts
therefore my name's the same. I write those thoughts down from time to time. And now I'm trying to get some critiques on those thoughts so that I can become ...
Jul 21, 2009 -
Re: Murder of a Teenage Life (Part 1)
Most bad people have their excuses for the evil things they do. Not the kind of excuse that a child would tell its mother to avoid punishment, but more like ...
Jul 21, 2009
